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Undertale - Goat Mom is Everyone's Mom by TC-96 Undertale - Goat Mom is Everyone's Mom by TC-96
Admit it, Toriel is everyone's mom X3 especially when they go out on family outings to the park. Someone has to keep an eye on all these kids after all, and Papyrus can get lost easily when he wanders


Toriel love icon : "Undyne please stop fidgeting." 
Undyne Screem "But is was saving it for lateeer..." 
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:iconiriuu:
Critique by iriuu iriuu/critique/1394192314">Jul 12, 2016, 5:33:51 PM
This is simply a good image, spirit of goat mom is really well implemented, the design of all the characters it's clean, the details, colouring and the background doesn't need anything else but, there are thing that I consider out of place.
First is the fact of perfection that have the image, all the characters are accommodated in such an order that doesn't look credible, then, there is a feeling of isolation, there are no other persons/silhouettes on the image, and makes it look like they are alone in the world, the third thing I notice is the change of style in the background and the characters itself, tho normally it doesn't matter or is not a big deal, I can't help the fact that the characters fit, but the style doesn't, other thing I see is the shading, even tho is good, it's poor, not in the way of it been bad or poorly done, there is too little of it, it complements well, but there space for so much, last thing is just a detail, the arm of toriel that is holding papyrus dosen't seems to be using force, even if pap is pure bones, undyne said it, "I don't thing I could even let him enter the royal guard, not because he is weak, he's actually really freaking tough it's just that he is too good".

thank you for reading, and I want to remind you TC-96 that even if this is a critique, is just my opinion and point of view, you can't please everyone, I really enjoy you content, and I just wanted to give you a sincere critique.

with appreciation Kevin Alejandro Floreas Pardio
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Critique by UndertaleGamin12342 UndertaleGamin12342/critique/1434416746">Oct 31, 2016, 10:51:46 AM
This is an Excellent portrayal of the characters Personalities. The details are absolutely Brilliant too! This is by far one of the most excellent pieces of work I found on this deviantart site. I love the way Chara and Asriel are portrayed as true siblings. I love the way Papyrus looks, as if he wants to go out and see the world in just one day. Sans Is portrayed as the game made him look. I love how toriel acts as a Mother to all of them, as if they are all her children. <D Thank you for this wonderful piece of art! ((I've never written one of these before...))
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:iconpsychicsurge:
PsychicSurge Featured By Owner 2 days ago  New Deviant
OMIGOSH THIS IS ADORABLE
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:iconrevan005:
Revan005 Featured By Owner 4 days ago
Toriel best mom in world!:XD:
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:iconscythewatch:
scythewatch Featured By Owner 4 days ago
burn dem ants chara, they nuthin but bad.
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:iconzwirzaczek10:
Zwirzaczek10 Featured By Owner May 16, 2017
Papyrus and Sans
Lel XD
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:iconbunnythehopper1234:
Bunnythehopper1234 Featured By Owner May 14, 2017  New Deviant Student Digital Artist
Sans would be me xD
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:iconbunnythehopper1234:
Bunnythehopper1234 Featured By Owner May 14, 2017  New Deviant Student Digital Artist
XD OMG TORIEL YOU ARE THE BEST MOM EVER XD
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:iconplumiel:
Plumiel Featured By Owner May 6, 2017
But... But...






POR INNOCENT ANT !
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:iconpinkapop:
Pinkapop Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
no asgore lel ;w;
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:iconnotblueberry:
notblueberry Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2017  Student Artist
is this the artist of endertale
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:iconpinkapop:
Pinkapop Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
ik
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:iconnotblueberry:
notblueberry Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2017  Student Artist
oml
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:iconmoonlight1022:
moonlight1022 Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2017  Hobbyist Artist
Sketch- PAPY, OMG!!!!
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:iconpinkapop:
Pinkapop Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
CHARA WHY YOU KILL ANT
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:iconnotblueberry:
notblueberry Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2017  Student Artist
chara:cause why not? =)
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:iconpinkapop:
Pinkapop Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
CHARA WHYYYYYYY
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:iconnotblueberry:
notblueberry Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2017  Student Artist
chara:what? K I L L I N G  I S  F U N
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:iconpinkapop:
Pinkapop Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
NOOO IT IS NOOOT
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:iconnotblueberry:
notblueberry Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2017  Student Artist
chara: yes it is =)



me:NO *slaps magnifying glass*
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:iconpinkapop:
Pinkapop Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
NOOOOOOO
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:iconnotblueberry:
notblueberry Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2017  Student Artist
chara:*slaps me*

me:*dead*
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CHCHcartoons Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2017
Frisk icon :iconsaysplz:Uhhh mom, Chara is killing again. 
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:iconeyesofred2333:
EyesOfRed2333 Featured By Owner May 15, 2017  New Deviant
creepy face - undertale chat icon - chara Speech Bubble Black Left Side Shut up, or you're NEXT.Speech Bubble Black Right Side 
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CHCHcartoons Featured By Owner May 15, 2017
Frisk icon :iconsaysplz:Come at me, sis!
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:iconeyesofred2333:
EyesOfRed2333 Featured By Owner 3 days ago  New Deviant
[Emote] Chara is triggered. Speech Bubble Black Left SideYou WILL regret this.Speech Bubble Black Right Side Frisk icon Speech Bubble Black Left SideBring it.
Undertale - Full of Angry Chara ScreamsSpeech Bubble Black Left SideRaaaaaaaaaaaagh!! Speech Bubble Black Right Side
Asriel40  Speech Bubble Black Left SideUh, guys?
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:iconnyanmayhem:
NyanMayhem Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2017  Student Digital Artist
Why is Frisk(probably the youngest one there) actually acting mature?!?
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:iconthegeekygameguy:
TheGeekyGameGuy Featured By Owner May 11, 2017
Because -he's- they're filled with determination.
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:iconmad-mutt:
Mad-Mutt Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2017  Student General Artist
Sans is my personal favorite part of this picture. 
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:iconpepperedsoda:
PepperedSoda Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
papyrus is on a baby leash.
good.
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iFlashboy Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2017
omg i would be so embarrassed if i was papy
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:iconbunnythehopper1234:
Bunnythehopper1234 Featured By Owner May 14, 2017  New Deviant Student Digital Artist
yep
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:icondragonlover2015:
DragonLover2015 Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Chara no
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:iconbunnythehopper1234:
Bunnythehopper1234 Featured By Owner May 14, 2017  New Deviant Student Digital Artist
chara : CHARA YES! =)
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:iconeyesofred2333:
EyesOfRed2333 Featured By Owner May 15, 2017  New Deviant
creepy face - undertale chat icon - chara 
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:iconbunnythehopper1234:
Bunnythehopper1234 Featured By Owner 6 days ago  New Deviant Student Digital Artist
Jeez fukin....NUT liok datz!
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:iconeyesofred2333:
EyesOfRed2333 Featured By Owner 20 hours ago  New Deviant
Chara Pony Icon 
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:iconbunnythehopper1234:
Bunnythehopper1234 Featured By Owner 7 hours ago  New Deviant Student Digital Artist
LazyIcon I wanna use - 8 FLOWEY Flower The Flowey 
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:icontunder2510:
Tunder2510 Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Aww, so adorable. :meow: I can see that. :D
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:iconphoen306:
phoen306 Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2017
I like how frisk looks like she's being more mature than the others
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:iconcecil475:
Cecil475 Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2017
I can totally see that.
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:icondiamondblingbling:
NOOOOOO CHARA DONT KILL THE ANTS!! ;O;






this is cute btw
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:iconxcherryleafx:
XCherryLeafX Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2017  New Deviant Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Look at Frisk in their little overalls!!!Cute Emoticon Blushing 
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:iconsweettooth2220:
sweettooth2220 Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Theres too much cuteness X3Hamtaro Mouse Emoji-02 (Kawaii) [V1] GIF Gravity Falls - AAAH THE JOURNALS!!!! 
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SomeKidThatDrawsBad Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I love Chara in this! She's sort of sadistic, but also Asriel's sibling.
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CalledSupD Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Why you so cruel chara?
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:iconmagomaevaamina:
MagomaevaAmina Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2017
Because people want to see chara as cruel person because it to easy to make  strories or draws with a one dimensional villain that pushed Frisk to kill or fight  .There what Chara says when you meet with winsum in the game"Is to sentive to fight..."or when you continues  ignore greater dog"Greater dog just want affection",or when you check annoying dog"let the dog to sleep",or when you fight against Dreemurs "....." Its very seems as it's  a sadist who talk,right?
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Darlaimerner Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2017
chara is burning ants
asriel is mourning the ants

papyrus is on a leash
sans is a backpack XD
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:icontc-96:
TC-96 Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
typical day in the Dreemurr family 
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:iconimxchi:
imxchi Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2017  New Deviant
Chara kills ants XD (sorry for my bad english)
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flippybear2004 Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2017
cute!! :)
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:iconelenaflames:
ElenaFlames Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2017  Hobbyist Artist
"Normal family" they wanted

"Happy family" they get
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